Thank you for reading. This is not my usual approach to poetry, except maybe the personifications. It was grounding to tap into the elements, into nature. I appreciate the feedback 🙏
Thank you! Something in me always wants to critique modern society and its absurdity. My poems and stories are my response to a world that wants its people to work themselves to death and strictly adhere to time constraints. I’m glad that line stuck out to you, it was intentional.
The setup was hilarious and relatable, and then the poem just slips into this lush, mythic tone. The Night as a character is such a vibe
Thank you for reading. This is not my usual approach to poetry, except maybe the personifications. It was grounding to tap into the elements, into nature. I appreciate the feedback 🙏
this poem was soft and yet strong in nature - it felt like a warm welcome into your soul
Thank you! 😊
Beuatiful. Love reading your pieces.
Thank you. That means a lot, Somya 🖤
Love this poem and love your writing style, made me laugh, hope you're feeling better 🪷
Thank you! I’m glad you enjoyed it. I’m doing much better now, I appreciate it 🖤
I did! Glad to hear it 🙏🏻
Nice!
Thank you 🙏
Loved it
Thank you, Aaliya!
I don't know why but this line- He hides from the Night, as He
has been conditioned to.. I like it very much
And I must say the introduction was also interesting.
Thank you! Something in me always wants to critique modern society and its absurdity. My poems and stories are my response to a world that wants its people to work themselves to death and strictly adhere to time constraints. I’m glad that line stuck out to you, it was intentional.
I read it aloud to Christie, to properly taste the words ❤️❤️
I love that. I may have to narrate this one—it was meant to be rhythmic.
Thanks for reading, George. I am feeling much better now. And I’m glad you picked up on the juxtaposition in the poem.
Although the “dead body” bit had me thinking about writing horror instead.