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Eric McCormick's avatar

This was really good. I found myself getting anxious along with the protagonist. Well done.

Brice Barrett's avatar

This is chilling, Scott. You’ve perfectly captured that specific horror of being 'disconnected'—both from the network (the dead phone) and from reality itself.

The conductor’s repetition of 'As always' feels like an algorithm that has glitched, forcing Katherine into a loop she can’t solve. It’s a beautiful, eerie metaphor for how we lose our orientation when our tools (and our 'Infrastructure') stop making sense. The image of her drumming her fingernails on a dead screen is a haunting detail—the ritual remains, even when the utility is gone.

I will post a link of this marvoulas story to my followers on Facebook. 🕯️🧭

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